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site crit

6/4/2020:
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13405538/scp-5152#post-4676806 (article was at +1 at time of crit)


6/13/2020

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13427640/scp-5062#post-4686910


6/14/2020
http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-5993
http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13430186/scp-5993


6/27/2020

http://www.scp-wiki.net/the-overseer


7/8/2020:

http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-5543

http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13501522/scp-5543

Article was at +2 at time of posting, +1 after in downvoted.


7/9/2020

Quick crit on a failing article:
http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-5411


July 2020
Limited activity due to contest obligations.


8/4/2020

http://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-5118

Article was at -2 at time of comment, showed potential.

Okay, let's see what you got. In my opinion, the article is stuck in a juxtaposition of being a neat concept that needed more fleshing out and being too similar to SCP-1739 without doing enough on its own. I'm not saying you need to write a novel but a little more substance and build up before the reveal would be beneficial. To compound the scant nature of your article's story, it also has many spelling, grammar, and clinical tone errors that need to be addressed. Overall I think if you spent some more time in the crit department polishing this up, the end result would have been much better, but as it is this is a no-vote from me. I hope you take the time to rewrite this as I think it would make a good piece if polished enough.

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